Audience Feedback - Changes double page spread

From my audience feedback I have made the changes to my double page spread.However I still need to make a decision on what looks better either keeping the text to the left of the image or the normal image without the text to the side.

Audience Feedback- Chnages Contents Page

I have made changes to my contents page from my audience feedback. I have added in some more cover lines to the side of the page to make it look as though there is more featured in the magazine and as though people are getting more for the money.I also added in a new feature to make the magazine more appealing.I made the text more clearer and bolder so it is easier for the audience to read, and I also filled in the empty gaps of the page so it looks as though there is no free space.

Audience Feedback-Recorded

Today I finished editing my audience feedback and recording it.I used final cut pro on the macs to edit the recording and to fit my images in with the voices so it is clear what part of my magazine I am talking about throughout.

Audience Feedback- Changes Front Cover

I have gained some audience feedback over the past few days and im now making the changes to my magazine on what I think will look the best and professional to fit the genre and audience of my magazine.Today I am going to record my audience feedback and upload it when I have completed it , I have started to make some changes to my front cover already from some audience feedback.

Audience Feedback On Front Cover-Final

Over the next week I am going to be getting audience feedback from my target audience and age group of who my magazine is aimed at, I will record it and upload it when i have received all the audience feedback.I will then make the changes that I think will make the magazine look more professional and better for the audience and also make it more clearer and appealing to them.

Audience Feedback On Contents Page

I asked many people what they thought of my contents page and how I can make it better, I asked a group of people in my age range of who I aimed my magazine at and the gender of theese people.

They said that I needed to vary the font styles more, to show more difference in the software I am using.Also to think about the background of the image of the boy, it should be plain and not with other things in the back.I will make theese changes to my contents page and post them when I have made them.

Audience Feedback on front cover

Over half term I gained some audience feedback of my front cover.I asked mainly females of the age range I have aimed my magazine at, and they thought that the colouring of the fonts of my magazine blended in very well.Also they thought that there was many different fonts and sizes of fonts.However they said that I needed to include more cover lines and arrange the texts in more neater places.I also took some more pictures and was trying to think up ideas of what I can use to do for my contents page.

Audience Feedback Front Cover

Lydia Female (16)-
I think that the front cover should be of either theese two images.I think the grey goes very well in the font it is in and the headline is very clear and links well to the audience and the image used in the cover.There is also enough space to place headlines around the image.The images are very direct and could appeal to the audience more, the blank background behind the girl put more emphasis on her and her appearence.

Nicole Female (17)-

For the front cover I think you should use this image.I think this because it fits very well with the genre and aims well to the audience of the magazine.There are also some good props included which shows you were thinking about the audience when you were taking the shots.The master head also looks very bright and appealing and will catch the audiences eye.It also contrasts very well with the black and white background as it stands out from the rest of it.Direct address from the girl being photographed also gives the audience a more personal feel to the magazine.

Audience Feedback- Name Ideas

Over the weekend I have been gaining audience feedback of my new name for my magazine.Many people said it was a much better name and fitted the magazine very well.

Audience Feedback-Colour Schemes

For my audience feedback I asked audiences of different genres what colour they think I should base my magazine on aiming specifically at the genre and audience. I asked females mostly because they are my specific audience for my magazine therefore I want it to appeal to them more than a male audience.From my audience feedback the most popular colours were colours 2 and 3, this shows that theese colours are the ones that are most appealing and will be ideal for the audience of my magazine.

Audience Feedback-Font Ideas

I have asked a few people what they think is the most ideal font to use for the name of my magazine on the front cover this font will be used for my logo and magazine name.

The most populaur font that got the most votes was called fluffy slacks my audience said they thought  this because it relates well to the target audience and type of genre of the magazine.Also because it appeals to the persons eye and is catching for the name and logo of the magazine which is crucial as a selling part to it.The font also feels magazine like and looks like a sort of scrap book and although its been cut out of a newspaper.This relates well to the genre of the magazine as it looks vintage and old.

Sneakerhead BTN Shadow font this is the font that was the most popular in my audience feedback.I have chosen to use this in my magazine.

Audience Feedback

Audience Feedback:

-Make headings bigger on the front cover of the magazine
-Include a date and price on the front cover
-Change the colour of font on the front cover
-Add pictures onto the contents page
-Make pictures less pixalated