Audience Feedback On Contents Page

I asked many people what they thought of my contents page and how I can make it better, I asked a group of people in my age range of who I aimed my magazine at and the gender of theese people.

They said that I needed to vary the font styles more, to show more difference in the software I am using.Also to think about the background of the image of the boy, it should be plain and not with other things in the back.I will make theese changes to my contents page and post them when I have made them.